Jaycee Woods

Prompt: What is the average height on an Apache male compared to the general population? Shorter?

Copilot: The average height of an Apache male is around 5 feet 10 inches (178 cm), which is actually taller than the average height for males in the general U.S. population, which is about 5 feet 9 inches (175 cm).

Does this height difference play a role in your story?

Prompt: I just wanted to describe Chief as he entered a meeting tent and thought a height variance might be notable.

Copilot: Sounds intriguing. Describing Chief as notably tall compared to others in the meeting can really highlight his presence and authority. His height can set him apart and underscore his leadership. What else are you highlighting about Chief as he enters?

Prompt: Coming back from a scouting mission, he gifts The Butcher a fireman’s axe that had been scavenged. In replacing The Butcher’s machete with a fireman’s axe, it symbolizes the shift from rural fighting to urban fighting with different obstacles to clear.

Copilot: That’s a powerful visual. The fireman’s axe as a symbol of transitioning from rural to urban combat is rich with meaning. It not only signifies the changing nature of their battles but also underscores The Butcher’s adaptability and readiness to tackle new challenges. This gift can deepen the bond between Chief and The Butcher, showing mutual respect and a shared understanding of the evolving conflict.

What other symbolic elements are you weaving into your story?

Prompt: At one point, Tak is talking to The Butcher about his Uncle Chappo’s war against a Mexican cartel. After he said ‘Mexicans,’ Tak spit on the floor. Is there an insulting gesture of disgust with Mexicans that an Apache might do besides spitting of the floor to get the taste of their name out of his mouth?

Copilot: An alternative gesture of disgust could be Tak wiping his mouth with the back of his hand, as if to cleanse himself of the word. This subtle yet powerful action conveys his disdain without being overly dramatic. It’s a small but telling detail that adds depth to his character and the intensity of his feelings.

What other character nuances are you exploring in your story?

Prompt: Would that gesture be something culturally specific to Apache? As is, I think the message is conveyed but I would be happy with an Apache specific gesture of disgust if there is one.

Copilot: The gesture of wiping the mouth to show disgust isn’t specific to Apache culture, but it effectively conveys the sentiment. If you’re looking for a culturally specific gesture, you might consider having Tak perform a traditional Apache sign of disrespect, such as turning his back to The Butcher or making a dismissive hand wave. These gestures can add authenticity and depth to your character interactions.

Does this help with the cultural nuances you’re aiming for?

Prompt: Tak likes The Butcher; however, Tak doesn’t like Mexicans because of his father’s death from Mexican fentanyl and longstanding feuds between Apache and Mexicans.

Copilot: That backstory adds a lot of depth to Tak’s character. His complex feelings towards The Butcher and his deep-seated animosity towards Mexicans create a rich, layered dynamic. This tension can drive powerful interactions and decisions, making your narrative even more compelling.