Jaycee Woods

On a break from editing, I drafted two new stories.

In one, my veteran vigilante Miles (that name is likely to change as too close to another character name, Myles as I can’t remember which is Y or I) is being interrogated by an FBI agent regarding the murder of a drug dealer in a robbery of cash and drugs.

Year before last or maybe last year, I had drafted an FBI interrogation story involving Claire of Nemesis and Claire so it should be a notably different story based on the characters involved. In Claire’s case, she was an escaped mental patient turned partner of a vigilante, so Claire psychologically manipulated and controlled the agent into become an unwitting mole for Claire into the FBI investigation of Nemesis.

In contrast, Miles is a disabled veteran recovering from a TBI; he patrols his neighborhood to keep people safe as he had in a foreign occupied city before his injury. The story begins with the idea that the FBI suspects him of killing a neighborhood drug dealer in a robbery. However, there are too many holes in the agent’s story; like why is the FBI involved and why is the agent focused on stolen drugs and money instead of the murder. Turns out she isn’t an FBI agent but private security who had been hired to protect the shipment of missing drugs; meanwhile, Miles had lured her security team into a trap. In the end, he coldly shoots the faux agent between the eyes with her own gun because she polluted his neighborhood.

While Claire was a dangerous murdering lunatic who became a protector in Nemesis’ effort to treat her mental condition, Miles, a former soldier returned home, wages a one-man war on crime in his neighborhood.