A.W.F.U.L. Mommies

hoe_math had an interesting observation about A.W.F.U.L. women in that since they don’t have a baby they seek out something to treat like a baby as an unconscious drive. This behavior shows up in how they speak to others with her in the role of mommy and the other (usually men) as the naughty child.

I haven’t done this in a story so it might be fun to try or to incorporate into a draft story during editing.

In a new story, I should incorporate the idea that naughty children don’t listen to mommy and how that relates to the ineffectiveness of that A.W.F.U.L. behavior.

Another irony would be the single woman’s complaint that she keeps picking men who want her to be their mommy, when she was the one bringing that energy to the table with her condescending perspective.

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