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Continue reading →: Naming a Ghost HunterRecently, I was working on editing my “Utsudere Stranger” story. She is a 2000 year old woman, who appears to be young. She is cursed to usher the dead into the after life. I never named the male lead so now is the time. I asked Copilot for a list…
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Continue reading →: Research: Concussion TreatmentPrompt: Are there any treatments besides rest and monitoring for a concussed patient? Copilot: Besides rest and monitoring, there are several treatments that can help a concussed patient recover: Over-the-counter pain relievers: Medications like acetaminophen (Tylenol) can help alleviate headaches and pain. Hydration: Drinking plenty of water is important, especially…
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Continue reading →: Apache PassOne of the inspirations to write “Geronimo’s Spirits” as a story about a 21st century Apache-Mexican war was “Apache Pass” by Andrew Ferris (INXS). It wasn’t like listen to the song and think suddenly of a story. It was more feed the song into my subconscious and wait for connections.…
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Continue reading →: Mya FightI was thinking about editing ideas for the “Mya Assassin” draft. Typically I don’t elaborate on fight scenes during drafts as they aren’t the point of the story. In editing this story, I think that I will make an exception as it will be part of the characterization by demonstrating…
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Continue reading →: Research: Concussion SymptomsPrompt: In the field what symptoms would a medic assess for a concussion in a semi-conscious patient? Copilot: In a field setting, a medic would assess several key symptoms to determine if a semi-conscious patient has a concussion. These symptoms include: Altered level of consciousness: The patient may be dazed,…
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Continue reading →: Boudica’s DreamRecently, I was working on formatting chapter 13 “A Slave Conspiracy” of my draft of Boudica and The Butcher. It begins with a dream sequence in which Boudica’s subconscious attempts to process her circumstance. I made the following out of character comment within the draft: “I like how her dream…
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Continue reading →: Research: The Butcher’s ConcussionPrompt: For adding descriptive detail to a fictional story about a soldier concussed in battle, are there any other issues I should consider? Copilot: Absolutely, adding depth to your story can make it more engaging and realistic. Here are a few additional aspects to consider: Environmental Factors: Describe the chaotic…
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Continue reading →: Research: Diversion of a Faux Naval InvasionPrompt: With the false naval invasion scenario, the land forces could be miscast as a blockade force against land reinforcement of the city so the rebels do not perceive them as a direct threat, reasonable? Copilot said: Yes, that’s a very reasonable and strategic approach. By miscasting the land forces…
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Continue reading →: Research: Drone WarfarePrompt: Drones? Would powering them be a significant drain on limited electrical generating capacity? Copilot said: Powering drones in a military field camp can indeed be a significant drain on limited electrical generating capacity, depending on the type and number of drones being used. Here are some factors to consider:…
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Continue reading →: To Hell and BackAnother Sabaton song influencing my drafting of Boudica and The Butcher is “To Hell and Back.” The song is about Audie Murphy, the most decorated American soldier in WW2. In particular, it is about him overcoming addiction to the prescription medicine he was given for his PTSD. Sabaton History w/…





