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Continue reading →: Character Images Using GrokI like creating an AI image to go with a story or character as he helps me visualize them for editing. Recently Gemini has become non-functional for creating human images and Copilot is becoming increasingly crippled by constraints. I just wanted an image created of a fat teenage boy dejected…
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Continue reading →: Two TribesConfesses that Frankie Goes to Hollywood’s “Two Tribes” was conceptually a big influence on my anti-war novel, Boudica and The Butcher.
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Continue reading →: Localizing DraftsI was formatting a draft story with working title “Guy on the Train” about a misunderstanding on a Japanese train. On a Saturday night, a young man (Kashoka) tries to run game on young woman (Akane) with a traumatic past. She ends up having a break down and he gets…
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Continue reading →: Research: Epidural or Subdural HemotomaPrompt: How might a medic in the field assess potential for an epidural hematoma? Copilot: In a field setting, a medic would assess for potential epidural hematoma by looking for specific signs and symptoms, including: Altered level of consciousness: A sudden change in alertness or consciousness, especially if the patient…
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Continue reading →: Brainstorming TitlesBelow is a comparison of results for different AIs on the problem of brainstorming a short story title. My Prompt “I am looking to create a title for a short story. It is about a situationship in which the woman wants a real monogamous relationship, but the man argues that…
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Continue reading →: Research: Concussion Ongoing MonitoringPrompt: What ongoing symptoms might the concussed patient have in the days or weeks afterwards? Copilot: A concussed patient might experience ongoing symptoms for days or even weeks after the initial injury. These symptoms, often referred to as post-concussion syndrome (PCS), can include: Headaches: Persistent headaches that can be similar…
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Continue reading →: Naming a Ghost HunterRecently, I was working on editing my “Utsudere Stranger” story. She is a 2000 year old woman, who appears to be young. She is cursed to usher the dead into the after life. I never named the male lead so now is the time. I asked Copilot for a list…
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Continue reading →: Research: Concussion TreatmentPrompt: Are there any treatments besides rest and monitoring for a concussed patient? Copilot: Besides rest and monitoring, there are several treatments that can help a concussed patient recover: Over-the-counter pain relievers: Medications like acetaminophen (Tylenol) can help alleviate headaches and pain. Hydration: Drinking plenty of water is important, especially…
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Continue reading →: Apache PassOne of the inspirations to write “Geronimo’s Spirits” as a story about a 21st century Apache-Mexican war was “Apache Pass” by Andrew Ferris (INXS). It wasn’t like listen to the song and think suddenly of a story. It was more feed the song into my subconscious and wait for connections.…
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Continue reading →: Mya FightI was thinking about editing ideas for the “Mya Assassin” draft. Typically I don’t elaborate on fight scenes during drafts as they aren’t the point of the story. In editing this story, I think that I will make an exception as it will be part of the characterization by demonstrating…






