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Continue reading →: Research: Internal Divisions and Military LoyaltiesOne of the problems with the idea of dramatizing a future US civil war is explaining why the Union is not dominating with jets, tanks, and artillery. Also, how do the career military officer corp get sidelined during a civil war in favor of National Guard officers? Prompt: New idea…
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Continue reading →: Using Copilot to EditSometimes when editing, it is easy to get hung up on picking just the right word…focusing on trees instead of the forest (the story). Below is an exchange I had with Copilot working through ideas related to editing a sentence. If you read my draft chapter “Harvest of Blood” from…
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Continue reading →: Tool: HemingwayPrompt: What advantages does Hemingway Editor offer for wordsmithing? Copilot: The Hemingway Editor offers several advantages for wordsmithing, especially if you’re aiming for clear, concise, and impactful writing. Here are some key benefits: These features make Hemingway Editor a valuable tool for refining your writing, whether you’re working on a…
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Continue reading →: Research: James Wilson CollegePrompt: Is there an equivalent pre-revolutionary hero in Pennsylvania to Patrick Henry? Would James Wilson be equivalent? Copilot: James Wilson is indeed a significant figure in Pennsylvania’s pre-revolutionary history and can be considered an equivalent to Patrick Henry in terms of his contributions to the American Revolution. Wilson was a…
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Continue reading →: Editing StepsWhile my first-year writing was for story drafting, since I have focused on editing. Early on I was frustrated that editing takes so long. To pivot, I broke my first pass edit stage by splitting off two pre-editing steps to clean up my drafts, instead of trying to do three…
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Continue reading →: Research: Treating Head Injury in FieldPrompt: In field medicine, how would the medic administer an antibiotic to an unconscious patient? Copilot: In field medicine, administering antibiotics to an unconscious patient typically involves intravenous (IV) or intramuscular (IM) routes, as these methods do not require the patient to be conscious or able to swallow. These methods…
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Continue reading →: Tak, Chappo, and The ButcherTak (aka Chief), as a scout who can bring intelligence to The Butcher from Pilgerruh and identify resources that can be foraged, is becoming a reoccurring presence in my draft of Boudica and The Butcher. At the same time, Tak is Chappo’s nephew from my draft novel _Geronimo’s Spirits_. This…
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Continue reading →: Research: Precarious Women’s RightsPrompt: Another aspect of the female slavery in the Boudica and The Beast story is to explore the precarious nature of equal rights as a luxury of modern civilization. While as Marxists, today’s feminists push to overthrow the current system, they ignore the degraded condition of women historically in communist…
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Continue reading →: The Crazy ExI was formatting one of my draft short stories when I inadvertently added to my reading list. The working title is “The Crazy Ex.” Norah is stalking her ex boyfriend. She is deeply conflicted about whether she wants to marry him or hurt him. In the middle of the story,…
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Continue reading →: Research: Boudica and The Butcher as a Love StoryPrompt: Ultimately this story is about love. The Butcher cannot live without his wife, so he becomes death. He believes that more people will live if he destroys the population of Cleveland as the war will end sooner. He doesn’t expect to survive the war, so he expects to die…





