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Continue reading →: Diabetics in a Civil WarIn a civil war, vulnerable populations will be subjected to the state of nature without the protection of modernity and capitalism. Consider diabetics as an example. Due to territorial fracturing and economic retraction, type 1 diabetics will die from a lack of insulin not all at once but over time…
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Continue reading →: Artistly for Descriptive PlayI ran a test with Artistly AI related to character description. As a prompt, I gave The Hollies lyric “Long Cool Woman in a Black Dress.” The prompt enhancer feature turned that into: “Create a captivating image of a tall, confident woman in her mid-30s, exuding a sense of effortless…
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Continue reading →: Cutting a Whole Chapter?After formatting Ch 3 “Good Touch” of Fixing Barbora, I was shocked that I thought that I might drop the whole chapter from the story. It isn’t that it is bad draft writing, but that the whole story might be better without it. The character development will be tighter, a…
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Continue reading →: Fixing BarboraAs I try to work through my inventory of raw drafts, I am started next with my largest partially formatted file to complete its formatting. The working title is “Fixing Barbora” weighing in at 100k+ words and 199 raw pages, so it is going to be around 16 chapters. Genre-wise…
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Continue reading →: My Editing StruggleI am at that awkward stage of editing where I have lost confidence in my ability to write. What is a paragraph again? How do I arrange dialogue? How do I describe stuff? I must clear my head by repeating my mantra, “Just tell a clear story as everything else…
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Continue reading →: Gut PunchTo cleanse my pallet, I finished formatting my shortest available draft in inventory at 5800 words. Very often when I read through a draft, it begins with me thinking this is an awful experiment so maybe it isn’t worth editing. Then I get to a point when I fall in…
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Continue reading →: Struggles with DoubtTwo phrases of famous last words common to men are “But she loves me” and “I can fix her.” Just as Chad in The Misadventures of Chad Seeking a Wife is based on the meme character, who I put into a story about him looking for a wife, my character…
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Continue reading →: A 007 BrainstormDang it. I got distracted by playing with Grok when we accidentally came up with a treatment for a new Bond movie. I was speculating as a creative writing exercise on various ways money from USAID could have been untraceably funneled back into Dem organizations and Antifa using historical examples.…
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Continue reading →: Chad Says No to SexAfter forcing myself to not draft new stories so I could edit, I allowed myself to draft one just to make sure that I still could. I revisited Chad from The Misadventures of Chad Seeking a Wife in a prequel teaser story. He goes into a bar after work on…
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Continue reading →: Boudica’s FeintI finished formatting Chapter 32 of Boudica and The Butcher, which I gave the working title of “The Feint” because of the deception in the chapter. Initially, I was going to call it “No Quarter” after the flag gifted by Miles and Ella to the general. Gideon decides that as…





